Tuesday, September 7, 2010

Essay 1 Organization

THESIS

  • Death is imminent

  • Many people believe that they have conquered death

  • Preparation for death varies among cultures and religions

  • People claim to have communicated with the dead

  • Life expectencies have increased

  • Thesis Statement= Through the use of channeling, scientifically extending life expectancies, and conducting rituals for the ill, the human race has been attempting to circumnavigate death without prevail.
1st Paragraph

  • Humans have been working to extend lives

  • What kills the most people?

  • How long have we extended the life expectancies?

  • There are an increasing number of centenarians

  • The average American is expected to live to be 78.11 years old

  • Ancient humans from the Roman area were only expected to live between 22-25 years
2nd Paragraph

  • Different rituals are conducted in preparation for an afterlife

  • How many people belive in an afterlife?

  • How do other cultures view death?

  • Asian cultures avoid the number "4"

  • Chistians practice the last rites

  • The Hindu culture believes that the deceased's spirit watches over its family for 10 days
3rd Paragraph

  • People belive they can overcome the barrier between the living and the dead

  • Who thought of taking to the dead?

  • Can people really talk to the dead?

  • "Channeling" is the process of communicating with a spirit of a person

  • NDE's are Near Death Experiences

  • A "tunnel vision" feeling is associated with NDE's

  • Thomas Edison is believed to have thought of communicating with the dead

1 comment:

  1. Cool idea for a topic. Suggestion: maybe in your 3rd paragraph under your first point you could include something about any well-known paranormal interactions that have occurred.

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